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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 6, 2007 16:33:53 GMT -5
coming up next card the first deimos annual.
mr.bloat vs t.k in the cage.
the return of a old friend.
the return of she devil will she be swarms friend or foe ?
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Post by swo on Aug 6, 2007 19:36:20 GMT -5
tk better watch out...bloat might eat him !!
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 6, 2007 20:56:39 GMT -5
card 105 demos annual
the show opens with a out door camera showing chief t.k getting out of his 2 hand cruiser and heading for the rear entrance.he is next shown headed for the locker room. he opens the locker room door slightly and sticks his head in.seeing no one around he enters and locks the door behind him.
the next scene goes to mr.neilybobs office as he is seen talking to a newcomer to the ace fed.
odyssey"please mr.neilybob let me audtion tonight i've got something to prove."
mr.neilybob"ok buddy but if you lose tonight i'm putting you on the reserve list.win and your opponet will go on the list."
odyssey"dont worry man its in the bag.a sure thing don't ya know."
odyssey leaves the room.
mr.neilybob"i've really got to talk to the talent scouts.i mean where do get they these guys ? "
matches
1.odyssey is pinned by j.j smooth after odyssey misses a deathjump.
2.scimitar over death knight 2 w/ death knight after death knight 2 slams scimitars head into a steel post outside the ring.
she-devil and two unkown figures are shown entering the building.they are headed for the stage area.they walk through the curtain and onto the ramp.
she-devil" i'm here tonight because i've got a message for swarm.mister you showed me your true colors when you left me with those freaks soug and bazzy at the o.r.w. . i think you had better stay away fore the time being.theres a lot more husseys in the galaxy you know."
muss"yeah and if you come near our new manager.we're going going to lay a smackdown on ya'll that you 'll never believe."
da bomb"thats right man. remember that if you got brain 1 in your head.
3.t.k lost to mr.bloat by dq after t.k lost control of himself andstarted brawling with a couple of fans down front.security came down and dragged t.k back to the dressing room.
4.plethador vs hustler. plethador came down to ringside with a dew rag on his head and carrying a couple of squirt guns.hustler saw this and went to work on plethador.eventually pinning him after a pistol whipping.
5.godsend pinned thock after hitting a deathjump.
6.nightmare pinned niklos romani after a black death.
meanwhile back at the comissioners office.vice was heard chewing out t.k behind closed doors.t.k came out with a angry look on his face.
7.sabotage(cwc) submitted to switchblade after a centauraus leg lock.
8.scorch(tv) pinned noxious after a trailblazer.
9.raze(ic) made ani-var(filling in for a injured monlith) via a sharpshooter.
main event
10.bloodline (hwc) pinned paganax after a galaxy mover.
at the end of the show massif is seen handing out flyers while wearing a conduct inc t-shirt and beret.
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Post by rock on Aug 7, 2007 1:13:22 GMT -5
heeheehee, Odessey talks like the ppl in the movie "Fargo", *don't cha know?!?* Must be half Norwegian and half Ravager!?!? Cool card as always bro, keep it up! Ray
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 7, 2007 9:12:51 GMT -5
card 106
the show opens with comissioner vice coming down to ringside.he is flanked by two beefy security guys.vice enters the ring(the security guys stand outside.)vice pulls a mic out of his belt.
vice"after viewing the footage of lasts card.i will say i'm pleased with everything except t.k actions.i'm hereby suspended t.k for 6 cards.the only way your getting any airtime is through your cooking show.dont like it ? then grow up."
vice puts the mic back in his belt and leaves the ring with the two security guys following.
matches
1.gyrt pinned ravnos romani after a coronary.
2.crocodile pinned eclipse after a hitmans clothesline.
3.abe lincoln x pinned death knight 3 w/death knight after a civil war slam.
swarm suddenly appears on the ramp.
swarm"you folks that watched last week all one of you.saw what that back stabbing she-devil said about me behind my back.well lady guess what ? i've got a new manager come on out phanasty."
phanasty comes out and stands next to to swarm.
swarm" as for those two clowns she now manages.guess what fellows? i've got someone to watch my back and be my tag partner.come on out payback."
payback comes out and stands on the other side of swarm.
swarm"one last announcement for now.i've hired a body guard name umagapotmus.so if any of you try anything tricky.just remember this face.come on out umagapotmus.
umagapotmus comes out and stands behind swarm.
swarm"now i'll let the the one person in the stands watch the reminder of tonights wrestling."
the crowds starts booing as swarm and company leave ringside.
4.swarm and umagapotmus came back out to wrestle american guy.swarm pinned american guy after a hornets sting.
5.disaster was pinned by umagapotmus w/ swarm after a belly to belly suplex.
6.tika pinned legacy after a samoan smash
7.anna complis pinned valerie flagg after a aiding and abetting.
mr.neilybob(wearing a cowboy hat.) came down to ringside w/ rotunda in tow.
mr.neilybob"i'm here tonight to adress a complaint i've recieved from the suggestion box.it seems that one person thinks that all divas should be slender and sexy in this fed.well if i hired slim and sexy women i would be sued by anti bias groups for this.so i've decided to hire rotunda."
out walks massif in his conduct inc gear.
massif"thats right mr.neilybob groups like conduct inc would sue your butt off over this.remember i'll be watching."
massif walks up to rotunda and hands her a conduct inc beret and arm band.
massif"rotunda you are now a member of conduct inc.your job is to make sure this fed doesn't discrimnate against fat people.if you see anything such things report to me ok ?"
rotunda"of course mr.massif you know i will."
massif leaves ringside.
mr.neilybob and rotunda leave after massif leaves.
8.aligator pinned encubus after a tailsault.
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Post by Aquinas on Aug 7, 2007 9:27:52 GMT -5
Great writeup, as usual.....I like the Conduct Inc thing. Swarm, Payback and Umagapotamus -- what an alliance!
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Post by rock on Aug 7, 2007 12:10:58 GMT -5
cool, But man, Disaster had to capture some gold here! Then my Avatar would be complete
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 7, 2007 12:30:53 GMT -5
hes just starting out.
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 8, 2007 18:33:53 GMT -5
swarm and payback are working out in the ring.when suddenly payback doubles up and falls to the mat.
Swarm"oh god are you alright ? speak to me payback."
swarm rolls payback on his back.suddenly payback starts coughing up blood.swarm starts shouting loudly.phanasty and umagapotmus suddenly appear.
phanasty"whats wrong with payback ? "
swarm"i dont know call for a ambulance phanasty.umagapotmus go get some towels."
phansty dials for a ambulance as umagapotmus runs into the locker room.
swarm"hold on buddy help is coming."
suddenly theres a shimmer of light as a paramedic and a ambulance driver bring in a strecther.
paramedic"move will ya ? we've got to get this guy to the ambulance."
swarm moves next to phanasty.she puts her arm around his shoulder.
phanasty"dont worry swarm payback will be alright.no need to worry."
swarm"no need wtf do you mean ? my buddys sick and i'm helpless for once."
paramedic"ok lets get him onto the stretcher and to the ambulance."
the paramedic and ambulance driver disappear in a shimmer of light.
swarm"i'm gonna follow in my cruiser phanasty.you stay and keep umagapotmus out of trouble.later babe."
swarm runs out to his cruiser hops in and leaves.
phanasty"ok umagapotmus what shall we do now ?"
umagapotmus looks at her and shrugs his shoulders.
to be continued next card.
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Post by swo on Aug 8, 2007 19:07:28 GMT -5
seems like Swarm and Payback are "closer "than we think ....
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 8, 2007 19:12:26 GMT -5
lets see how this story line turns out.
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 11, 2007 9:09:09 GMT -5
part 2
swarm is shown pacing in the emergency room.waiting for word on paybacks condition.half a hour later the doctor comes out.
swarm"ok doc what caused payback to be ill ?"
doctor"i've got good news and bad news mr.swarm.it seems mr.payback has contracted a mild form of tuberculous thats the bad news.the good news is that hes resting comfortly."
swarm"you call that good news doc.my pal is going to die from this.hes going to have to retire from wrestling man."
doc"ah yes he will.but he will be more comfotable in a dryer climate though."
swarm"i'm going to help my pal through this.i'm going to help him the best way i know how.can i go see him doc ?"
doc"just for a few minutes though hes sleeping now."
swarm"ok thanks doc.i wont be there long."
swarm walks into paybacks room.
swarm(to sleeping payback)hi buddy i promise to be here if you need me.in fact our posse will be there as well.gotta go now rest my friend."
swarm leaves the hospital tears running down his face.
fade to black
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Post by cakejedi on Aug 11, 2007 9:13:56 GMT -5
Will Payback make it? ? Maybe Swarm needs to take him to the healing pool of Bethsesda. It worked for Maxine Babe !
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Post by vansabu on Aug 11, 2007 10:36:04 GMT -5
Conduct Inc. -great addition, I love it !
You should have TK beat people with spoons and stab them with forks, like abby the butcher !
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 12, 2007 12:00:20 GMT -5
coming up on the next card:
the return of t.k s cooking show
3 title defenses
the tag team tourney starts here.
a update on paybacks condition via swarm.
the newest member of conduct inc makes his debut.
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Post by rock on Aug 13, 2007 0:11:36 GMT -5
looking forward to that Neily
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 13, 2007 21:22:48 GMT -5
ace card 107
the show opens with swarm in the ring.
swarm" payback asked me to let the fans know that hes still hanging in there and to thank them for the cards and letters he has recieved."
mr.neilybob comes to ringside
mr.neilybob"swarm i've come down to ringside with a special announcement.i've decided to let you take a leave for as long as you like.(the fans cheer at this.)also to give payback our best in his fight vs his diease."
swarm"well i'm sure he would like that.even if it came from you liar."
neilybob shakes his head and leaves ringside.
the scene switches to the stage by the ramp.
voice"welcome ladies and gentlemen to cooking with t.k."
out comes t.k who looks around nervously as if looking for someone.
t.k"thank you mr.voice. ladies and gentlemen welcome once again to my show.tonights guest is plethador."
theres a loud squishing sound as plethador.fresh from leaving the sauna appears.
plethador"thanks for having me t.k. "
t.k" tonight i'll be making trout almonde ding."
plethador"i cant eat that i'm a vegatarian t.k.can we do a salad instead ?"
t.k"no we can't plethador.so stick to the script will ya ?"
plethador"ok but i'm not eating the trout."
t.k"fine then don't geez."
ten minutes later after the ingrediants are put together and put into the oven.
t.k"we'll be back in 30 minutes to enjoy this treat.don't worry plethador we'll make a salad as well."
matches
1.death knight 2 was pinned by thock following a diving shoulder block.
2.the romani's defeated wall st(debut) by pinfall when ravnos romani pinned e.z come after a dance of knives.
3.j.j smooth was pinned by godsend after a realm eternal.
4.nightmare pinned paganax after a blackdeath.
5.mr.bloat over ani-var by dq after ani-var rammed mr.bloats head into the steel pole.
massif and rotunda enter mr.neilybobs office.
massif"i see you been behaving yourself neilybob.so allow me to introduce the newset member of conduct inc.enter if you will indigo."
in walks indigo wearing a black beret and armband that say conduct inc.
indigo"man its great to be back here in the fed."
massif"indigo your job is to prevent ticket scalpers from selling tickets to the poor fans."
indigo"no problem boss ."
massif(to rotunda)"your job now is to make sure that the food is served evenly."
rotunda"can i make sure its hot too ?"
massif"just make sure you leave some for the fans doll."(he winks at indigo)
6.bloodline is pinned by alligator after a tailsault.
7.scorch(tv) pinned plethador after a trailblazer.
8.raze(ic) pinned encubus after a brainbuster.
9.switchblade(cwc) pinned sabotage after a blades of retribution.
the lights switch back to the stage where we see.t.k eating the trout.while plethador looks like he was going to lose his cookies.
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Post by swo on Aug 13, 2007 21:27:36 GMT -5
oh poor Payback....
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Post by rock on Aug 14, 2007 11:21:16 GMT -5
T.K. "thank you mr. voice"! Classic, you know, I can actually hear T.K. saying that!! LOL
Good showing as usual my friend.
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Post by johnnyreb on Aug 14, 2007 14:12:04 GMT -5
coming next card
bloodline vs aligator in a title match.
neilys big announcement.
plus 2 tag matches.
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