neils ace

[blueraider1]

reminder who ever gets the 1100 hit on my a.c.e fed contact so

you will be on my next a.c.e card ok?

thanks,

neilybob

[blueraider1]

we have a winner tune in to see what he gets.also to see who won.

[blueraider1]

a.c.e card 34

the show opens in the comissioners office.the door flys open and in walks paganax w/preemia.

paganax"where the heck are jackyll and krypt at-las?."

comissioner at-las"dont know paganax this is the first i've heard of their disapperance."

preemia steps in between paganax and comissioner at-las.

preemia"well killing each other wont help.so cool your jets and listen to each other ok?"

paganax"they weren't in the locker room when i arrived just now.have you seen them?"

comissioner at-las"no just like i said earlier i haven't seen either one of them."

the camera switches to the masters locker room.

master(rubbing hands while watching the monitor.)looks like trouble in paradise eh boys?"

avanter"sure does boss."

olympus"what did happen to them?"

master"unkown i guess they decided to leave a.c.e.why don't you two go get ready for your match tonight."

avanter and olympus"see you later then"

they leave the room.in walk two men wearing masks and wearing outfits with mystic symbols on them.

master"are you two ready to win tonight against the specialists?"

mystic knight 1"you better believe it man."

mystic knight 2"we're gonna rule this fed."

the master turns back to the monitor and smiles.

the camera returns to the comissioners office as the crowd sees the comissioner talking to two wrestlers.

comissioner at-las"sorry bous i've got bad news your'e being released from a.c.e

hellpaso"why what did we do wrong?"

codebreaker"yeah man we busted our butts and get screwed in the end."

comissioner at-las"well heres your last checks then."

as they leave a blond haired woman and two dark skinned men enter the office.the taller one closes the door.

matches

1.wayfarer lost to diablo by countout

2.nicodemus was pinned by creamator

3.blackbear pinned current

4.ramona rocker pinned stormchild

5.thraxx pinned flatliner to become the new a.c.e champion.

6.zygon submitted to paganax

7.avanter/olympus beat cannonball/snake

8.toros was pinned by painmaster

9.murdok made nemean submit

10.austin storm made quetzal submit

1.general rankor made swarm submit

12.noxious lost to rom-el by dq

in the main event

13. the mystic knights beat the specialist to win the tagteam belts

fade to black

[GrumpyBigBee]

great card Neil. Keep those dice hot!

[gatekeeper]

Good card. Does the aCe have some GWF defectors? We'll have to wait and see.


It will be interesting to see who Thraxx faces in his 1st title defense as aCe champion.

[blueraider1]

35 more hits until1200 the person who hits 1200 please contact me via a pm thank you. ;D

[blueraider1]

a.c.e card 35

the show opens outside the masters locker room.the crowd sees agon standing outside holding his ear.

agon(whispering)"evening folks agon here.i'm using reaver technology that i borrowed from nicodemus to spy on the master and his brood."

(agon feels a hand on his shoulder and turns around to be confronted by olympus and avanter.avanter pulls the ear mike off of agons ear and crushes it with his bare hands.they drag agon in a nearby broom closet and start working him over.)

(meanwhile at ringside thyros and preemia are interviewing the new champ thraxx with him are the dark meance and zygon.)

preemia"thanks for taking time from your busy schedule for this interview."

dark meance"no problem preemia you may ask some questions.thraxx has very little time for interviews.

preemia"ok first question now that your'e the champ when will you defend your belt?and against who?"

dark meance "his first defense will on the next card.it will be verus paganax."

preemia"question two will the dark meance be at ringside?"

dark meance"of course i'm the planner for my boys."

(the sound of loud rock music comes over the speakers.two guys dressed in heavymetal clothes are followed by the master.)

master"why waste your time with this bum when you should interviewing my two latest finds grunge and gothic the next best thing in this fed."

dark meance"stand in line and wait your turn master.or do you need a translator who speaks gibberish for you?"

master"not funny dim meance my boys are ready to rumble anytime.lets go boys these guys aren't the real deal like you two.later dim meance and the measly race haha."

thyros"i'm glad they left have you seen agon by the way?"

preemia"he left the announcer table before the interview.said something about getting something from nicodemus."

(a member of the security team comes running out and whispers in thyros ear.thyros and the security leave the area.)

preemia"wonder whats going on?oh well on with the show."

matches

1.tevia made harrier submit

2.hellrazor submitted to tricks the clown

3.wonder woman submitted to robin rebel

4.pitt made chris cosmos submit

5.corporal tek beat mauler mcgregor by submission

6.vision made she-devil submit.vison is the new ladies champ

7.stiletto made sly fox submit

8.hades made toron submit

9.grunge/gothic beat angry abdula/shahbula

10.savi over paige by dq

after the card the emts are shown taking agon to the emergency shuttle.thyros is shown standing at the door in shock.thyros is heard to mutter one sentence"revenge is a dish best served cold master."

fade to black

[blueraider1]

anybody have a clue on who the mystic knights are?

[swarm]

Great card. I think the mystic knights are Nightmare and Petarra.

[swarm]

1200! I'm in the show!

[blueraider1]

we have a winner its deadringer. ;D.the next contest will be the 1300 post getting a date with a diva from my a.c.e fed good luck.

[swarm]

blueraider1 said:

we have a winner its deadringer. ;D.the next contest will be the 1300 post getting a date with a diva from my a.c.e fed good luck.

WOOT! WOOT! Man I am really moving up in the world...er, galaxy...

[steelthunder814]

Neilybob another good card, you skills are improving in the behind the scenes areas also. Keep it up.

[blueraider1]

a.c.e card 36 the card opens with preemia at agons bedside with his doctor.

preemia"doctor how long until agon can come back.?"

doctor"at least 4 weeks ma'am.maybe longer due to the beating he took."

preemia"well there you have it fans.back to you thyros."

(the camera returns to the show.where thyros is in the ring)

thyros"thats good news preemia.now ladies and gentlemen let me present the winner of our latest contest."

(swarm and a unkown person wearing a hood walk towards the stage.)

thyros"swarm why are you here?this is your night off."

swarm"thyros i was asked to escort the winner to ringside so he can make his announcements.ok buddy do your stuff."

(the stranger removes his hood and the crowd sees a mirror where a face is supposed to be.)

deadringer"greetings pathetic ones my name is deadringer.your contest winner got cold feet and couldn't appear.how pathetic right swarm?"

swarm"you got it man."

deadringer"heres the matchups for the p.p.v:

for the heavyweight belt:

(the titantron comes on and we see comissioner at-las.)

at-las" due to jakyll's disapperance there will a battle royal to determine the champ."

deadringer(clears throat)"for the ic belt wayfarer vs paganax.

for the tagteam belts the mystic knights vs grunge/gothic.

for the womens title savi vs paige.

swarm"now it's my turn deadringer will be entering a.c.e in two months.we'll be forming a tagteam.i'm also leaving a.c.e for two months to help train deadringer.

thyros"wow real intersting fans.so now lets go to the matches."

1.hellrazor made mauler mcgregor submit

2.tricks submitted to pitt

3.wonder woman beat robin rebel in a rematch from last week in a cage match.

4.shah'bula lost to stiletto via dq

5.slyfox made grunge w/gothic submit

6.vision was pinned by savi and lost the ladies belt

7.hades was pinned by scorch

8.harrier beat stormchild by dq

9.gothic lost to mstic knight 2 by submission

10.noxious pinned rom-el

11.shepard was pinned by general rankor

12.mystic knight 1 made murdok submit

13.austin storm was pinned by olympus w/the master

[swarm]

wow! AMAZING! Dead Ringer and Swarm as a tag-team in aCe!

That is huge news!

[blueraider1]

promo for next a.c.e card

update on agon

video broadcast of swarm and deadringer in training

two more wrestlers get released

the return of the trouble shooters minus one.

all this and more next card

JUST A REMINDER WHOEVER GETS THE 1300 HIT ON THIS THREAD CONTACT ME VIA A PM.

[steelthunder814]

very good neilybob

[blueraider1]

will the person who did the 1300 hit on this thread at 6:25 pm today contact me via a pm?

[GMAN]

Nice cards Neil, keep up the good work. Can't wait to see the Dead Ringer/Swarm tag team.

[blueraider1]

a press conference was scheduled at 1:00.four figures are on the stage.the one with a bowl on his head steps to the mic.

nicodemus"master what you and your goons did to agon is without honor.i and my three friends nemean,ventross and general rankor would like to face your team in a 12 man elimnation match."

(the titan tron comes and we see the master and his group the brood.olympus and avanter,grunge and gothic and the tagteam champs the mystic knights.)

master"better count again nickeldumba**.you only have four guys.we have six.."

nicodemus"oh i forgot to introduce our two newest members of our group hickory and buckshot.since you hired two heavy metal clowns.we went out and got two country boys.

(buckshot and hickory enter the room to the country song" dont give us a reason "by hank willaims jr.

nicodemus(smiling)"well i guess this makes it even now.we
would like this match to be at the ppv and the match will be 12 elimnation match i metioned earlier."

master"you better bring somebody to be your manager..this group couldn't win a iq test."

nicodemus"dont worry we'll find someone you just bring your gang of idiots.oh by the way our team name will ravager revenge from now on."

master"and when we win the team name will lizard losers."

(the masters and the brood laugh as the screen fades to black.)